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Tuesday 20 August 2013

Goldilocks and the three bears

Once upon a time they were three bears that lived in a cottage and then one day mother bear made a porridge, Then mother bear said “ let's cool it down and we can go to the beavers” and then they went of. One little girl went by and saw a cottage and then she knock on the door and no one answered the door and then the door crept open. The little girl named was goldilocks and she went in and saw three porridge and then she tasted one porridge and the first one was father bears porridge and his one was too hot and Mothers bears porridge was too cold and baby bear's porridge was just right and then she ate it all. Goldilocks went around the house and then she went to the living room and saw three chairs and father bears chairs was not comfy and mother bear was too comfy and baby bears was just right and then it broke. While she was walking around she saw three bed and father bears bed was too hard  and mother bears one was too comfy and baby bears one was just right and then she fall asleep in the beds. In a hour the three bears came back and then they saw baby bear's porridge and his porridge was gone. Baby bear went to the living room and then he saw his chair was broken. Then baby bear went to his bedroom, DUN DUN DUNNE! and then Goldilocks was eaten.

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