Once upon a time they were three bears in the forest nearby a cottage and they were kind but not baby bear. Father Bear was kind when some say “hello” he replied back by saying “hello”. Mother bear were good at cook because she has a recipe so she can share it with people and she visited some of her friends. Baby Bear was kind of a bully because he played games so he can win and he bullies people.
One day a little Girl named Goldilocks went by the three bears house and started to knock on there door. No one answered the door,the door was kind of open and goldilocks went in and then she went in the kitchen and she saw the bowl of pudding and then she taste all of them and she ate all of baby bears pudding. Goldilocks went into the living room and she saw three chairs, One of the chair was too big, The other was was too comfy and the last one was just right.
Goldilocks went up stairs and saw three beds, One bed was too big the other one was too comfy and the last one was just right and then she was fast asleep when she said “I’m going to lay on it for a minute.” The three bears came back they saw Baby bears puddling finished and baby bear's chair was broken. They then they went up stairs. When they went up stairs they saw a girl on baby bear’s bed it it was a goldilocks and then she woke up and then she got scared. Baby bear’s said “Don’t be scared” and then baby bear’s made friends with goldilocks.
They Live Happily Ever After.
THE MORAL of the story WAS don’t sneak into someone's house until they let your or they said you're allowed and make good friends.
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Good retelling of the story Peh So. I can tell you have edited it carefully.
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