My Punctuation Goals

Cross Country

On Thursday we did cross country and it was amazing and Lee,Isa and Satikea came First Second and Third and I came Ninth. It was a long time to wait for the tens years old because the Nine, Eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two and one was going for they run and I was hot and thirsty. Some of  us were doing sponsor and it was hard because some people won’t come because they were too busy.

We had to run out of the school and go to the park and around then back to pt england and then go to the finishing line. After we had a run we had a drink of water and lots of us want to have a drink. When were at the finish line and then I was tied that I wanted to sleep.

When I was running I saw Byron and he went past me but when we got near the finish line I sprited and Then I came Ninth.It was a hard race but I didn’t come last.I hope we do it next time.

Goldilocks and the three bears

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Once upon a time they were three bears that lived in a cottage and then one day mother bear made a porridge, Then mother bear said “ let's cool it down and we can go to the beavers” and then they went of. One little girl went by and saw a cottage and then she knock on the door and no one answered the door and then the door crept open. The little girl named was goldilocks and she went in and saw three porridge and then she tasted one porridge and the first one was father bears porridge and his one was too hot and Mothers bears porridge was too cold and baby bear's porridge was just right and then she ate it all. Goldilocks went around the house and then she went to the living room and saw three chairs and father bears chairs was not comfy and mother bear was too comfy and baby bears was just right and then it broke. While she was walking around she saw three bed and father bears bed was too hard  and mother bears one was too comfy and baby bears one was just right and then she fall asleep in the beds. In a hour the three bears came back and then they saw baby bear's porridge and his porridge was gone. Baby bear went to the living room and then he saw his chair was broken. Then baby bear went to his bedroom, DUN DUN DUNNE! and then Goldilocks was eaten.

HoodWinked

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style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 15px; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Once upon a time they were Little red riding hood was at home when her grandma called her to come because she was sick and told her to bring some food. While Little red riding hood was going to her grandma she saw a big bad wolf that wants to eat her and then the wolf said “Hey Red where are you going” and  Little red riding hood said “ I’m going to my grandmas house because she is sick”. The Big bad wolf had a idea and his idea might work, His idea was to go to Little red riding hoods grandmas house and then eat her first then Little red riding hood. So Little red riding hood went to her grandmas house and then the wolf said “Come in” while Little red riding hood were going closer she said “What big eyes you have” and the wolf said “I am sick thats why” and then  Little red riding hood Said “What big hands you have” and then the wolf almost ate her when the woodcutter was running down because he was cutting the trees and one of the trees was rolling down to him and then he jump through the window and started to scream.The Moral of the story is don’t talk to strangers or someone you don’t know.

Goldilocks and the three bears

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Once upon a time they were three bears in the forest nearby a cottage and they were kind but not baby bear. Father Bear was kind when some say “hello” he replied back by saying “hello”. Mother bear were good at cook because she has a recipe so she can share it with people and she visited some of her friends. Baby Bear was kind of a bully because he played games so he can win and he bullies people.

One day a little Girl named Goldilocks went by the three bears house and started to knock on there door. No one answered the door,the door was kind of open and goldilocks went in and then she went in the kitchen and she saw the bowl of pudding and then she taste all of them and she ate all of baby bears pudding. Goldilocks went into the living room and she saw three chairs, One of the chair was too big, The other was was too comfy and the last one was just right.

Goldilocks went up stairs and saw three beds, One bed was too big the other one was too comfy and the last one was just right and then she was fast asleep when she said “I’m going to lay on it for a minute.” The three bears came back they saw Baby bears puddling finished and baby bear's chair was broken. They then they went up stairs. When they went up stairs they saw a girl on baby bear’s bed it it was a goldilocks and then she woke up and then she got scared. Baby bear’s said “Don’t be scared” and then baby bear’s made friends with goldilocks.

They Live Happily Ever After.

THE MORAL of the story WAS don’t sneak into someone's house until they let your or they said you're allowed and make good friends.

The Ugly Duckling

Once upon a time In a beautiful farm where The Mother duck was laying her eggs when she heard a crack and the six little ducklings came out of it’s eggs. One of the egg was much bigger than the others, the mother duck was too lazy to lay on it again so she left it until it hatch. She thought she count the eggs right and then she saw a Gray duckling and she said “ where did you come from” and the mother duck fed him a lot of food and he was happy.

The ugly duckling was sad so he ran away from home and then he was in a pond while he sat there he saw some swans up in the sky. The ugly duckling went out and ask lots of birds who he was and they keep on scorn at him. The ugly duckling didn't give up that easily so he keep on asking and then he got exhausted and he had a rest. While he was resting a farmer saw him and took him back to his farmyard then he fed him food and his two children was looking after him so he was happy.


The Farmer was taking good care of the ugly duckling. The ugly duckling grow older so he took him back to the pond. Then he look at the water, he saw his reflection. He couldn't believe it, he was a swan. The ugly duckling was grown but he didn’t know that. The ugly duck went out and one swan said “ where have you been”? “it’s a long story” the ugly duckling said. They live happily ever after. The End I HOPE YOU ENJOY!

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