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Friday, 21 September 2012

The big whales

The Whales is big and large thats bigger then the three class.The baby calf get feed by his mother Whales.These animal live in the sea and and the chinese people killed the huge blue whales.

The blue whale is longer and they are heavy as a dinosaur . The blue whales is big that I have it for dinner.

1 comment:

vaifoa said...

Hi Pheso

That is a nice piece of writing there I really love it. That is a great picture of a whale. Is that whale a whale shark it looks really big. It is a neat writing but I think you need to read it out a loud to your self so your writing can be much better. And theres a little mistake in that writing . Theres is two ands in there. Keep it up Pheso!!!

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