Some kids went in the puddle and then some kids got dirty. They had mud everywhere on their body. When I got there I was going to fall in the water when I was looking down.The mud went all most up to my leg when I was walking.
I got back to school and I didn’t came last and Ron was behind me and I was in front of Rone.
When I almost got to the end I caught up to Ron and the girls. Some of the girls were walking on the
way to school.
The mud was so muddy, like a pig could roll in it. It was squishy and sloppy, I thought it was really deep that you can touch the ground.
I had fun running but I was walking just for a while. I had to jog all the way back to Pt England School and it took me forever because of all the mud and the steps.
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Miss Walker : I enjoyed reading your story. The cross country sounded like an excting event. I really like the bit in your post where you decribe the mud. Squishy and sloppy are excellent words to sue. I can almost feel the mud oozing between my toes.
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